I went out for a crisp walk in the early morning. When I hurried back to my home, locked the doors and looked out the window when… To Be Continued.“This book is
terrible,” said Miles practically yelling. SHH! Yelled the librarian. “I could make
this book more energetic,”
“Then why are you reading these “Terrible” books” asked Bruce, Mile’s level-headed friend ,”My dad’s car battery ran out so I am waiting for him to pick me up”. “Oh.” As Bruce pulled
out a huge white book. I decided to eat my sandwich . W hen all of the sudden every thing started to shake furiously…
Well done on your writing Baby Gronk.
ReplyDeleteIt isn’t easy to write a story with only 100 words but you managed well.
You grabbed my attention from the start with your opening sentence.
You’ve taken great care with spellings and grammar but I didn’t quite understand what is happening in your story.
Looking forward to reading your writing in the future.
Keep up the good work !
Shane, Teacher
Dublin, Ireland
(Team 100)