When morning came, flashing camera lights woke me up. I new one thing for sure I was lost... All I can remember is that there was some stumbling, then found myself in some golf course. I could not say anything. My hearing was limited, fuzzy and weird. Not like normal. I was frozen! Like a statue, I could not move.
There was a plaque that read, "the poltergeist of the gardens."
I am not a ghost! Then I realized the people that where taking pictures of me... they set me up but who?
Hello Babygronk,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting use of the prompt photo! Who indeed, and why? I'm left wondering if you will be a statue forever. Try to include more adjectives and interesting vocabulary to help paint a picture in your reader's mind. I appreciate how you have included a variety of sentence lengths, as this was part of today's lesson. Keep on writing and improving.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Van